A. shopping on the internet四级作文（网上购物）
on the internet
on the internet we can watch foringn news and get some news .we can sent e-mail and make telephone calls .we can study on the school through the internet .reading aii kinds of books and learn English by myself.we can listen music .watch match an play games.we also can shopping on there.
我想来应该可源以了，希望你能会
B. 帮忙看看我的这篇作文可以得多少分 四级的关于网购1现在网购已经成为一种时尚2网上购物的利弊3我的建议
第三行，动词 是has 不是have 主语it 后面注意一下动词！第六行也有错误！挺好的写的，我四级的时候没写出这水平应该，现在英语忘光了