A. shopping on the internet四級作文（網上購物）
on the internet
on the internet we can watch foringn news and get some news .we can sent e-mail and make telephone calls .we can study on the school through the internet .reading aii kinds of books and learn English by myself.we can listen music .watch match an play games.we also can shopping on there.
我想來應該可源以了，希望你能會
B. 幫忙看看我的這篇作文可以得多少分 四級的關於網購1現在網購已經成為一種時尚2網上購物的利弊3我的建議
第三行，動詞 是has 不是have 主語it 後面注意一下動詞！第六行也有錯誤！挺好的寫的，我四級的時候沒寫出這水平應該，現在英語忘光了